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What do you think about a gangbang girl? I mean, a girl that does it just because she likes it, and not because she's paid for it or because she's forced to do it. | | If that's what gets her off, go for it. | Is a gangbang bad if it is consenual? I was talking with a co-worker the other day and he said he and his three buddies had sex with a some 22 year old woman. I was shocked at first but he said she liked it. He said that they made sure she was comfortable and told her that they could stop at anytime. He says that gang bangs are not bad as long as nobody is forced into anything. Does he have a point or is it still bad? By the way, i would never get involved in a gang bang, it's not my cup of tea. lol! | | Not my cup of tea either, but if everyone involved is an adult and the activities are consensual, then its all good. | If you think you know rap music.......? Then please provide me with some honest feedback about my verse. Ialso have other ones I've asked if you want to see the. Just click on my profile. Here goes nothing:
No one said you had to gangbang to spit hot fire,/
so i spit with unprecedented passion and desire/
I'ma tap tryna tap into your wires like the PATRIOT act/
Then we voted for Obama, Where da patriots at?/
To make a livin on the mic is where my focus be at/
Haters get stitched up, like upholstery cracks/
your rhyme supposed to be whack, because u worshippin tracks/
that's on the radio, don't make me blow a verbal attack/
Cuz where my verbal is at, it's lookin down at your hat/
A bettin man would say u didn't get the meanin of that/
let me explain. What I meant is that your mental is crack/
My words'll go right over you, like there's wings on the track/
A bright young mind with a razor sharp tongue/
words hit u with the force of double-barrel shotguns/
but I'm overlooked just because I never shot guns/
or ever sold rocks posted on the corner block slums/
So go head & laugh now cuz you'll be locked up later/
because your perpetual greed dot u addicted to paper/
playa u need to pay attention this economy class/
because your way of gettin paid is philosophically cracked/
you got a gat, a cadillac, and your rims, they spin/
while i make my way legit, through the ink of my pen/
u see there's somethin that u boys don't seem to comprehend/
u on top now but inevitably u know I'ma win/
U paid now but all that counts is which is rich in the end | I liked and I can imagine it being sung but I didn't get the meaning.
If it actually has a meaning then I guess it's a good song. | If you think you know rap music.......? Then please provide me with some honest feedback about my verse. Ialso have other ones I've asked if you want to see the. Just click on my profile. Here goes nothing:
No one said you had to gangbang to spit hot fire,/
so i spit with unprecedented passion and desire/
I'ma tap tryna tap into your wires like the PATRIOT act/
Then we voted for Obama, Where da patriots at?/
To make a livin on the mic is where my focus be at/
Haters get stitched up, like upholstery cracks/
your rhyme supposed to be whack, because u worshippin tracks/
that's on the radio, don't make me blow a verbal attack/
Cuz where my verbal is at, it's lookin down at your hat/
A bettin man would say u didn't get the meanin of that/
let me explain. What I meant is that your mental is crack/
My words'll go right over you, like there's wings on the track/
A bright young mind with a razor sharp tongue/
words hit u with the force of double-barrel shotguns/
but I'm overlooked just because I never shot guns/
or ever sold rocks posted on the corner block slums/
So go head & laugh now cuz you'll be locked up later/
because your perpetual greed dot u addicted to paper/
playa u need to pay attention this economy class/
because your way of gettin paid is philosophically cracked/
you got a gat, a cadillac, and your rims, they spin/
while i make my way legit, through the ink of my pen/
u see there's somethin that u boys don't seem to comprehend/
u on top now but inevitably u know I'ma win/
U paid now but all that counts is which is rich in the end | Lyricism: 6.5
Flow: 7
Some parts were corny, other parts were good. It's all about the beat and the flow though. There are enough lyricists out there, you need to go hard on it and get a sharp hook. Check out some Biggie **** or Eminem-Bully for some good ideas when it comes to hooks. I mean you could throw this on a track and it would be aight but get a good beat for it and go from there. Good Luck. |
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